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The synopsis is original, It deviates from your usual expectations and that is a hook in itself. The start presents the characters, specially the protagonists and narrator of the story, aproaching the reader and making them attached. The answer of "What happened between Willy and Chrissy" can't leave my mind and makes me want to keep reading. The vocabulary and phrasing of the story is also really rich and most of the time is beautifully structured which I find highly attractive and pleasant and even better It manages to avoid being verbose, as sometimes can happen with this types of writing. However, some chapters can become a bit tiring due to the amount of cuts done by the narrator to talk about Christine's body or to tell the reader they'll know about something later. It's fine to put some subjective description, specially given that is a romantic interest of vivid passion, but if It cuts at every two to three sentences It can break the chapters pace and get in the way of the story. The endings leave the reader at a very interesting and unpredictable moment where important events are about to unfold.

Willy & Chrissy

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I'm glad you're enjouyingtge novel, and I apologize for not updating it regularly you will soon have enough content to nibble on, I'll do my best to bring you nothing but the best and I'm glad you left an honest review !!