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read till ch 15 but so far everything is really chaotic and scenes changes suddenly for example he was talking to saito and zero, and suddenly scene changes. even power he i setting is confusing as this AU mixed universe has differ kind of powers. sometimes author showed that in combat training he got future knowledge but he does not give wht knowledge he got at the a time but will say it in future chapters which makes is less coordinated, less interesting and more frustrating for readers to connect with the novel. as mentioned in synopsis after ch 15 it will be danmachi so, will give this novel a chance for few more chs hoping for some improvement.

I Will Live A Better Life!

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