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I see no reviews yet so... I'll make one. The story premise is good, even though it kinda falls into the classic isekai trope that is in my opinnion over used, but it isn't a big deal. I like the story and world background so far and think that the novel is headed into a good direction. The only big complaint I have so far is the grammar and writing quality. I understand that english may not be your first or even second language since that is also the case with me. Also I have one more "complaint" with your novel and it is that the characters and especially the female lead seem kinda one dimentional and simple, this is a thing that can be fixed in my opinnion with experience and good planning of the upcoming chapters, but also I am not a writer so what do I know. Over all a enjoyable read if you can ignore the bigger grammatical errors. I will keep reading this to see where the story ends up and how the novel improves.

I am an Alchemist, but somehow my wife is a demon princess

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