it has alot of potential and the plot is pretty interesting. my only problem with it is how short the chapters are.
JLongtain
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LIKEHey, Gds_Gooddaysir Yes, the chapters are short, and that's because I tried to emulate comic strips. You know how some artists publish little comics every day? That's exactly what I tried to do, but with text. That's why I'm able to update the story every day. Don't worry, though. From chapter 200 and onwards, the chapters will get longer. And from 280 onwards, they'll be even longer. The story is already finished, in fact. If you're interested, you can pick up a copy of it on Amazon. I'll keep publishing the story completely for free, but if you'd like to get ahead, here you go: https://a.co/d/b5QWHAQ
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