Review Detail of Gryphindoros in Felix Scarletwound: The Transfiguration Prodigy

call it an au if your not going to use cannon timeliness correctly. Your writing itself is good no grammar issues, sentence structure works, and your lyrical flow is awesome. however as I stated before study the original and use correct info before just throwing things out aka children in their first year wouldn't know what a death eater was, nor did the deatheaters exist at that point the parents of the students were knights of walpurgis. Those children eventually went on to become dearheaters when riddle came out as voldemort but not this radically early.