Review Detail of Child_of_Fate_9204 in FrostBitten (Percy Jackson Fanfic)

I never write a review for fanfic because I am too lazy to write it, but after seeing the author's desperation to improve his writing skills through reviews to pinpoint his mistakes I'm writing this.I'm still reading this fanfic bcoz it was not a common fanfic where Percy and Artemis or Percy and Annabeth pairing is mostly focused on. The OC part is related to Jack Frost (It is still not revealed if it is related or not, I'm just considering) made me read this fic.I always liked the mystery feeling given by any fic I read. Till now author followed the PJO rules for all Greek gods and myths, don't know if he will include other myths also (I'm hoping he does). I like to read a proper harem story but that doesn't mean I don't read non-harem stories if they gained my interest.The updating stability is very good becoz writing above 2k chapters every day among the author's daily schedule is very difficult but this author managed to do it.Sorry, but don't hope for pointing out mistakes in your fic according to character design or plot becoz I'm not good at it. Join bigger circles of fanfic authors to improve your stories, I suggest.