Review Detail of Eldritch_Umbra_2710 in War On Man

This is a very interesting novel. The story starts slowly, but it takes quite the turn by the time the second chapter rolls around, which should inspire readers to continue reading. The only thing to really hit the story on is the writing quality. While the plot itself is easy to follow, the actual flow and penmanship is where things fall through. Descriptions are much too abrupt, and as always, (inside joke of mine), Numbers aren't letters, and they shouldn't be used when the number described is less than one hundred. Overall, an excellent and intriguing story that suffers from penmanship that requires some optimization is all. I recommend this story, and wholeheartedly congratulate the author on making something special.