Hi, Sand Kastle here!đ° (Shamelessly rating my book 5 stars since I like it) Are you looking for a story with an unlimited level-up system that will allow an underdog to evolve into an overpowered figure in the idol industry? If yes, then, this story's for you!
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LIKEMy second question is not so much of a question, something I want to say. In recent chapters, donât remember which one specifically, June character character seems to be not so steady? I donât know how to word it, I want to say âup and downâ Iâm sure thereâs a word for it but yeah. Donât get me wrong, I love Juneâs character, the changes the first 100 chapters was smooth Iâd say, sure by time the thug speech that couldâve stayed with June longer did disappear, but I didnât see that as a problem after 3 and more reread because June was always a softie, from his sister to his gang members, and author Sand Kastle did write the changes hhappening within him from the friendships he formed that impacted him. However what I am talking about, although it might seem minor, Iâm worried if itâll continue happening, itâs the chapter when he was at the cemetery with CHAOS member if I remember right, the brothers. June reaction was so out of character that if it wasn't for the character written was June I wouldâve thought it was akira or Zeth. I just wanted to let you know, iâve read all your replies and am aware youâre going for the comedic route and I understand (and love) but that can be done without changing his personality to his of rogue thoughts! I'm aware you know this because the story is written well, there is 500+ chapters so it couldâve been a mistake? Anyway that is all.[img=Loving it][img=Smitten][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Sigh]
Potato_killer:Is his career as an idol going to continue after the survival show? The title kinda gives the feeling that its going to end ather the show is done.
I think it could work especially with your writing style and if you feel like you need some drama(seeing how companies don't like idols dating and neither do the fans usually)
SandKastle:not sure yet!
SighO1:i don't like kpop but bruh this novel is frcking interesting keep up the good work plus take pride in gaining my interest
please if theres's romance don't focus on it too much because it'll be boring. if it has romance make it super slowburn or not at all
SandKastle:not sure yet!
no romance right now! (i don't think this novel will focus on romance, too). if there will be, it'll be very minimal!
Yohan_Sqvnjrgld:please if theres's romance don't focus on it too much because it'll be boring. if it has romance make it super slowburn or not at all
the novel is very good. i am constantly looking for new chapters..............................................................................................................................however, there is something missing. say this, if June was not a thug and just a normal transmigration, would there be any difference in the story. man you have completely obliterated the traits, he should have gained in the process. he should at least have caution and planning. you have said that he was becoming stronger than his boss, he should be one of the best. despite repeated targeting, there is not even a hint of pre planning, if anything goes wrong. he got stabbed, this should have been huge and at least the ex phoenix employee's fate should have been given and at least a paragraph should have been given detailing the police procedures, the arrest of the two including the person that allowed the two on set. moreover, there is his killer present in front of him, i can understand, he cant do anything now and his main target now is to save his sister but at least cautious behavior and the scene of mc planning should have been enough. the expensive things given should have been at least stashed to safety in his own house or even keep it temporarily with choi. being a thug working for money, i assume it would be his nature to protect money or expensive stuff. he could have planned to sell some to upgrade is phone. inner monologues hinting at his future plans while his enemies are in front taunting or faking politeness might be good too.......................................................................................................... the story as i said is very good and i don't expect him to act as a super spy but at least give us something to act as reminder to us of him being a super thug outside of thug like speech and martial arts. his adversary stabbed him but he still takes his potential enemies lightly................................................................................................................................author, please don't take it badly but i believe if these aspects can be improved, it might be better. thank you and waiting for updates.
SandKastle:no romance right now! (i don't think this novel will focus on romance, too). if there will be, it'll be very minimal!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I do want to take these things into consideration: 1. Being in a gang and being an idol is two completely different things (one that June isn't really used to yet). 2. June still hasn't uncovered the truth about Joon-ho's life, and is preoccupied with the survival show. 3. I try to incorporate Jun Hao's "caution and planning" during these targeted attacks, but can only do so much with the current June's knowledge of the situation. 4. Right now, I'm focusing on the idol survival show prospect and would delve into the deeper, more darker, stuff as we go by. However, I do appreciate your critical comment. I will try to incorporate such traits in the upcoming chapters (the ones I haven't written yet), as June will continue to face challenges. Please do note that I am still a rookie in this genre, i.e. fantasy, transmigration, and have a difficult time incorporating such themes. Another thing to note is that I am going for a more comedic route for this novel (as I am still learning how to write serious themes), so take this with a light heart. With your comment, I'll surely try my hardest!
TrackShadow:the novel is very good. i am constantly looking for new chapters..............................................................................................................................however, there is something missing. say this, if June was not a thug and just a normal transmigration, would there be any difference in the story. man you have completely obliterated the traits, he should have gained in the process. he should at least have caution and planning. you have said that he was becoming stronger than his boss, he should be one of the best. despite repeated targeting, there is not even a hint of pre planning, if anything goes wrong. he got stabbed, this should have been huge and at least the ex phoenix employee's fate should have been given and at least a paragraph should have been given detailing the police procedures, the arrest of the two including the person that allowed the two on set. moreover, there is his killer present in front of him, i can understand, he cant do anything now and his main target now is to save his sister but at least cautious behavior and the scene of mc planning should have been enough. the expensive things given should have been at least stashed to safety in his own house or even keep it temporarily with choi. being a thug working for money, i assume it would be his nature to protect money or expensive stuff. he could have planned to sell some to upgrade is phone. inner monologues hinting at his future plans while his enemies are in front taunting or faking politeness might be good too.......................................................................................................... the story as i said is very good and i don't expect him to act as a super spy but at least give us something to act as reminder to us of him being a super thug outside of thug like speech and martial arts. his adversary stabbed him but he still takes his potential enemies lightly................................................................................................................................author, please don't take it badly but i believe if these aspects can be improved, it might be better. thank you and waiting for updates.