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Review Detail of Kabuk5 in DC: with D&D Artificer

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Read 24 chapters but couldn't continue, as this story seems to be written specifically for those who enjoy reading about one thing only - crafting. While entertaining, there was no character background or development so far, and I reached the end of my patience, since I want more than just crafting - this is not a bad story, I'm simply not the intended audience, but I would have appreciated a warning of sorts at the beginning. Grammar and world background could use some work, but since the story is craft focused, there's no world background whatsoever so far.

DC: with D&D Artificer

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yes, I did give you guys a warning, and the story goes on there is some background information on who he is, as for the world itself, the mistake I made first was basing the world in the cw series Naomi but I change to the arrow verse later, Into the arrow series