Bro, work on your grammar. I read it and was intrigued by the plot. It's not like the characters are bouncing important dialogues off the table. The MC's sister is a strange character, but I liked it. I'm looking forward to the appearance of the cousin and meeting Evelina.
ThanatosPierce
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LIKEBro use Grammarly. after writing a chapter transfer it to Grammarly writing page it will tell you all your mistakes and correct them.
ThanatosPierce:Thank you for your support. English is not my first language, so I may not understand how well I translate the text. The rest of the characters will definitely have a meeting! [img=recommend]