Review Detail of Nicholas_0951 in Help! I don't want to NTR the protagonist!

The plot is too slow, the character is a paper tiger that is not smart enough to be a villain (He almost got killed in a cave and was saved by plot armour), the grammar is wrong almost every paragraph and I finally dropped at 131 due to the most egregious misspelling below:plagued by assignation attempts and sabayon frassignation should be assassination, but sabayon fr is indecipherable and should've been caught before posting, showing the author's lack of care for his webnovel