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After I’ve read 20 chapters. I'm disappointed in your work. and I have to tell you this novel will never succeed because your folly incest. And I can guarantee with my head! …You’re lack of considering how is reader accept for incest. For example these are the thing you have to present before make incest scenes. 1) Mc is adopted child of the woman who still single. 2) Mc is the true son but he birth from ritual and that woman still single. 3) Mc’s father too evil and his mother was divorced. But you’ve written if Mc’s two parents still alive and they were managing family’s business. You are too silly even no yuri or ntr in your work.

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Slice of Life: Ye Nolisi's Life

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