Review Detail of Deshawn_Wilkins_04 in I Am The Strongest Original

Item: I Am The Strongest Original
Rating: 4.4

Review detail

Deshawn_Wilkins_04Lv41yrDeshawn_Wilkins_04

I like the story so far but the only thing I’d say you need to work on would be the pacing of the story

PrimordialOrigins

Liked by 3 people

Vader98Lv12Vader98

Also more dialogue

1yr

Deshawn_Wilkins_04Lv4Deshawn_Wilkins_04

Definitely needs more dialogue

Vader98:Also more dialogue

1yr