Review Detail of EvilBlueCrystal in Martial Peak (Fic)

i was going to read this but from this and the title's of the chapter uh i have to find another one

Thanks for sharing your oh-so-charming review. I couldn't help but notice that you have this uncanny ability to consistently give low ratings to fanfiction novels.You know, while fanfiction might not be everyone's cup of tea, there is a massive community of fans who find immense joy and fulfillment in these stories.It's a shame you haven't been able to embrace their creativity with an open mind.

I wrote this fic for my own entertainment since I can't find any good martial peak fics, and although the way I write may be complicated, I try to take the whole background of a character into consideration when building it. the relationships, etc.

Thanks btw

if you cant write a better martial peak fanfic its best you just leave it, least you insult the original work. Yang kai is one of the intelligent MCs his journey is in needed satisfying, we need something similar or better at least make your MC intelligent. doesn't matter if the background is not good but the MC has to be atleast intelligent, how could you trust an old monster in open heaven so willing?

make the MC intelligent thts all

And how do you make an intelligent MC? As I said before, this is for my own personal entertainment; you are not obliged to read it. If you cannot give me an example of the type of intelligence you want, then I can't help it.

Hello author continue writing his fanfic don’t listen to others

its pretty simple actually just look at the journey of yang kai his decisions where actually good for a protagonist in an original cultivation novel, but your MC has an innate adv of knowing the whole plott and additional wisdom of other novels, you cant just trust someone that easily ryt?

Most of his journey was based on luck and on plot armour; in the last one, it was someone who knew what was going on, and I know it's kind of stupid to just trust anyone, but Come on, do you want me to write a romance story for them? It was already the 14th chapter at that time.

yes it was indeed plot armor and luck isnt it thr same with your protagonist getting a master in the open heaven realm in tht lower planet if its not luck n plot armor then what is it?😂 anyway if i recall collectly Yang kai ddnt have even a teacher most of the time it was self taught goin in the upper realm improving with his own skills, and i seriously dont care if your protagonist has romantic relationships or not as long as you dont make the poor sap a virgin for the rest of your novel 😂 . it wouldn't have been a bad idea if he only got the memories of tht open heaven cultivator just the memories then let him go on alone n develop with his journey.