Review Detail of ToufiqUlAlam in My master lived for 100000 years and became unbeatable.

I love your writing style, mainly diction. For me, this type of diction is very hard to pull off. It's difficult to continued writing in this fashion. However, you proved yourself a formidable writer! The theme is overused no doubt, but your take on cultivation was indeed something interesting. It's like One Punch Man's Hagemanto hero vibe. All it takes is 'a punch from Saitama'---the ultimate villain slayer. I hope you definitely finish the story. your challenge will be to keep the story entertaining. If the hero does not face much bigger challenges, it will soon be very boring. You have to be more daring and should not fear to test newer ideas. I hope your novel flourishes. Good Luck.