Review Detail of yokedjaguar in Reincarnated in a Fictional world

First of all, thanks for taking your precious time to leave a review for this book, but i have somethings to say about this. 1. I already explained about me writing in a Mobile phone so don't expect too much from me. 2. About writing in too much detail and overwork, that's because I am a new Author who has been writing for only less than a month. 3. And about your suggestions for getting a editor, dude are serious? obviously, me writing this book is just for fun and now you want me to hire a editor or find someone to correct my mistake in grammar? you think too highly of me dude. I am just a f*cking poor guy who don't even have the money to buy laptop or computer.