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The author stages their world building in segments, allowing the reader to put it together while moving the plot forward. While the formatting can be a bit disorienting at first it is consistent. The pacing of the story reflects the manic state of the character's mind, turning from one topic to the next as the main character works through not only the danger of the moment but also the realities of the world he finds himself in.

Grave borne Revenant

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thank you for the review i willl try to improve the story so that all readers could enjoy it more