Review Detail of Aniz_ooal_Clown in One Piece : My Revenge

Item: One Piece : My Revenge
Rating: 5

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Aniz_ooal_ClownLv11yrAniz_ooal_Clown

Great grammar and the plot is good the mc was Rocks vice captain was betrayed by whitebeard, big mom. Can't wait to read when he takes his revenge and make them pay

One Piece : My Revenge

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I_Love_Fanfix_Lv1I_Love_Fanfix_

That's because it's a Chinese fanfic. English Title: Great Voyage: After Decades Of Seclusion, The System Is Here? ChineseTitle: 大航海：归隐数十年，系统来了. It has 173 chapters.

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GomuningenLv14Gomuningen

What were you on when you said this story has great grammar? What rubbish! Barely passable grammar! Tons of mistakes! Random wrong POV changes! Huge mistakes in the story like calling beginning arc Captain Smoker as Vice Admiral etc.

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