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Legaro
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Shameless review here by author, but this is my hope for the future of my novel. The book was originally a wish-fulfillment idea that I had, but I wanted to not make it pure wish fulfillment. I'll update with a fixed schedule and welcome any and all comments, provided they aren't disrespectful to me, the author, or the readers who might or might not enjoy the book. Give it a try, let me know if you like it, or if you don't, so I can improve it.

Dragon of Absolute Sovereignty (DXD)

Legaro

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KaratePepe
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So far so good 👍

Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

thanks 😁

KaratePepe:So far so good 👍
Helios_Sol
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please don't have him becoming a slave to the devils

Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

I'm not planning on that, as Sharon is a prideful person due to his dragon bloodline. However, he will do what is necessary to gain power. Also, what exactly do you mean by slave?I don't remember Issei being a 'slave', well, unless you mean how Akeno and Rias would play around with him in the anime.

Helios_Sol:please don't have him becoming a slave to the devils
ThreshGasm
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accepting the evil piece means becoming a slave it doesn't matter how the Gremory treat their servants , from an outsider point of view he is a slave no need to sugarcoat it

Legaro:I'm not planning on that, as Sharon is a prideful person due to his dragon bloodline. However, he will do what is necessary to gain power. Also, what exactly do you mean by slave?I don't remember Issei being a 'slave', well, unless you mean how Akeno and Rias would play around with him in the anime.
Helios_Sol
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the peerage system is slavery no matter how it's looked at or used it's still slavery

Legaro:I'm not planning on that, as Sharon is a prideful person due to his dragon bloodline. However, he will do what is necessary to gain power. Also, what exactly do you mean by slave?I don't remember Issei being a 'slave', well, unless you mean how Akeno and Rias would play around with him in the anime.
Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

It could be seen both ways, but I do see what you mean. I might have him not accept the evil piece, but it will change my plans.

ThreshGasm:accepting the evil piece means becoming a slave it doesn't matter how the Gremory treat their servants , from an outsider point of view he is a slave no need to sugarcoat it
Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

I see what you mean, but I can only say I've got something planned. 😁

Helios_Sol:the peerage system is slavery no matter how it's looked at or used it's still slavery
Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

Hahaha, you took the words right out of my mouth. That's what I was planning, but it was supposed to be a surprise, kinda. oh well. 😅

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ThreshGasm
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i removed my comment

Legaro:Hahaha, you took the words right out of my mouth. That's what I was planning, but it was supposed to be a surprise, kinda. oh well. 😅
Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

Oh, thanks!

ThreshGasm:i removed my comment
FinnsRevenge
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2 questions; Why name the mc Sharon? is there any yuri?

Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

1. It came to my mind one day when I was coming up with names. I'm not sure how, but I liked how it sounded. 2. No Yuri. I'm not a fan of Yuri in a Harem.

FinnsRevenge:2 questions; Why name the mc Sharon? is there any yuri?
FinnsRevenge
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Just odd to me for a male mc to use a feminine name like Sharon. Glad to hear there's no yuri, good taste

Legaro:1. It came to my mind one day when I was coming up with names. I'm not sure how, but I liked how it sounded. 2. No Yuri. I'm not a fan of Yuri in a Harem.
Legaro
LegaroAuthorLegaro

Thank you. And yeah, the name apparently did sound odd to some others too, but I had no idea, but it's alright. I personally like the name. If it doesn't feel right, you can always just swap it to another name. It won't do much to the story.

FinnsRevenge:Just odd to me for a male mc to use a feminine name like Sharon. Glad to hear there's no yuri, good taste