The concept is good but the execution was subpar and just childish, everything just seems out of place and unnecessary, it has the feel of a crack-fic while not being one itself(at least I don't think it is, I couldn't read far enough to find out)
MELBA:...why?
Sir_Squirrel:The concept is good but the execution was subpar and just childish, everything just seems out of place and unnecessary, it has the feel of a crack-fic while not being one itself(at least I don't think it is, I couldn't read far enough to find out)