Writing quality is excellent, the descriptions are vivid and pull you into the scene. At times they can be too much, but it matches the tone and style of the story. My only complaint would be that the romantic conflict is almost retrospective. There is little initial barrier, very little tension. They're swept into a whirlwind romance and only after the smoke settles are they pulled apart.
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