Review Detail of Rusty_noddle12 in Overwatch: Rise of Rose
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I think the dialog and interactions between characters in the story are like a bad mix of concrete, missing something, has too much or too little of something, and I end up just slogging through it in hopes it gets better; basically the characters lack charater, leading to stiff conversation. It's probably just me being used to stories where you can see the MCs character all over the story, and even in a different pov you see the changes that were about by interacting with MC.
Overwatch: Rise of Rose
Eaglestriker_22
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I can agree that the dialogue can be lengthy sometimes.I don't know what you're referring to when you say it's missing something but when I know it'll be improved on.Rereading, I can say the only character who doesn't feel like they any is Barbara. Of course that's just because I'm the author and you're the reader so you get different vibes from things I wouldn't. I'll improve any characters dialogues in the future.
Eaglestriker_22:I can agree that the dialogue can be lengthy sometimes.I don't know what you're referring to when you say it's missing something but when I know it'll be improved on.Rereading, I can say the only character who doesn't feel like they any is Barbara. Of course that's just because I'm the author and you're the reader so you get different vibes from things I wouldn't. I'll improve any characters dialogues in the future.