Review Detail of Immortal_hobbyist in Re: world conquest in another world

I really like this story. It's really fun to write and I always put my all into it. It's got a pretty long plot and I'd say that the start is probaly the worst bit. It gets better the farther you go into it. Everyone has there own standards and if you can read it until it's good then I commend you. And if you can't then thanks for checking this story out at all.