Review Detail of Kyatus in Vampire: World of Blood

This story has a good concept and world building as well as some interesting characters. The biggest issue is the writing quality and just the slow development that occurs due to the writing. The author, at least for the majority of volume 1, is constantly info dumping during dialogue. This makes what would usually be a very interesting story a massive slog to read through. I want to enjoy this and read it but the constant unnecessary info dumps or the massive paragraphs of the MC repeating his motive that we already know every chapter is very annoying. Another thing that set me off was when the character just randomly decided to use a bunch of money to mess with the church. This action was then praised by his butler but to me this just seemed super petty and unimportant to the people he is trying to mess with. Overall: Again the world is very interesting and it is very clear that the author is very proud of it. The issue is he wants to show off as much of the world as soon as possible which is ruining the pacing of the story in the beginning puts me and probably others as well off of the novel.