Review Detail of hiatusy in THE DEMOM SEX SLAVE

The writing quality gives my OCD, ADD, dyslexic brain, nightmares...-> Both punctuation, and spacing, are all over the place.-> Words are straight up missing, got my phone looking as if it has dyslexia too.-> The dialogue is all bunched up with no proper distinction between who's talking.-> It's just a mess, with zero structuring.and that's just the tip of the iceberg...