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Shameless review from the author is here~ First time writing so pls do point out my mistakes in paragraph comment, whether its a grammatical or lore. Also don't be shy to put your suggestion for the story in the comment! Hope you enjoy the story..
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Fayy_
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summer? do you mean summary or what?? As for your suggestion, first of all thank you for suggesting it to me and enjoying my fanfiction but this is different from reality. This is a fiction in a fantasy world after all. So I'm sorry to break the news to you but this fanfiction will have a harem for the protag.
malinizgeldii:Is this really your summer? looks exactly like chinese translation ff. Besides this question, I have a suggestion. Please don't put a harem. The harem can only exist in a fantasy world. you can look at the harem of the current arab princes. do you think they are happy?
Fayy_:summer? do you mean summary or what?? As for your suggestion, first of all thank you for suggesting it to me and enjoying my fanfiction but this is different from reality. This is a fiction in a fantasy world after all. So I'm sorry to break the news to you but this fanfiction will have a harem for the protag.
malinizgeldii:I use google translation. That's why we couldn't agree. Is this your novel or a translation?
hârêms exist in real life dude. i personally know of 1, and there are millions other cases. We can only blame ourself for being unlucky
malinizgeldii:Is this really your summer? looks exactly like chinese translation ff. Besides this question, I have a suggestion. Please don't put a harem. The harem can only exist in a fantasy world. you can look at the harem of the current arab princes. do you think they are happy?
there are harem irl but most if not all are in a miserable state, the arabs prince for example he has money his face isn't really ugly but his harem is still in disarray, all of his sons are fighting for inheritance when they grow up and same could be said to a lot of harem style families.
Psan:hârêms exist in real life dude. i personally know of 1, and there are millions other cases. We can only blame ourself for being unlucky
you have a point. but there are hârêmş where they are all happy. i know 1 such case where i live, this dude has been dating 3 girls and live with all 3 since college and its been over 10 years now and they still live together and each girl have their own children now... the dude is the full package, tall, handsome and F rich lol, and if what the girls say is true, he is huge. im 100٪ not jelly... definitely (Hopes he gets ED).... though the family of the girls are not happy lol.
KING_IN_YELLOW:there are harem irl but most if not all are in a miserable state, the arabs prince for example he has money his face isn't really ugly but his harem is still in disarray, all of his sons are fighting for inheritance when they grow up and same could be said to a lot of harem style families.
Psan:you have a point. but there are hârêmş where they are all happy. i know 1 such case where i live, this dude has been dating 3 girls and live with all 3 since college and its been over 10 years now and they still live together and each girl have their own children now... the dude is the full package, tall, handsome and F rich lol, and if what the girls say is true, he is huge. im 100٪ not jelly... definitely (Hopes he gets ED).... though the family of the girls are not happy lol.