It's one of those different PoV stories, where you dont really change much, just one element, but it slowly with cause and effect starts shaping a whole new story. I like it, and kind of inspiring me to write another Naruto Fic xD. 4.6/5 for me up to the opening 10 chappies. My advice would be to develop the MC's character a bit more, as well as Itachi's new development, for now the MC kind of doesnt have that impact. Maybe give him a quirk? yes watching clouds as laying in the grass is a good start, but give him more character ya know? anyway good luck.
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LIKEI am doing good now, thanks for asking, and as for this Naruto fic, it will take time. I won't lie, as I forgot many things about the fic, and writing from where i left off will have a lot of mismatches. But worry not, I have already started writing other fics, and should be posting one very soon. so stay tuned.
95_novel_maniac_95:Hey bud, how are you doing ....will you continue your naruto fic...? It was really good