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Floxy_Belle
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It's quite interesting, but there are some things you should take note of. Firstly, try to express your characters properly. Give them more emotion's This enables a reader to connect with them better. Secondly, there are a few mistakes that can make a reader confused. Also, you should write a synopsis for the story. Most webnovel readers judge a story by reading the synopsis. It is very crucial. Overall, it has a good 👍

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Floxy_Belle
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I'll definitely read more

Doreen_Patros
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oh okay

Doreen_Patros
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will work on it, but if you read the whole story you will get the development

Floxy_Belle
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But really try to write a synopsis. Some readers determine how good a story is just by reading the synopsis. Trust me.