Review Detail of adam_9531 in A JEDI IN WESTEROS

I got to rate this low because within the first 3 to 4 chapters the MC is stupid as well as the plot, he gets thrown into the world gets a light saber instantly loses it in a stupid way, to Jamie fucking lannister. After i read this chapter i had to have a break before I broke me phone reading it. maybe this just my preference, but I can't see anyone liking the plot, and seeing as this is a fan fic that's all the writer is doing, although I'll say the writing quality is ok. I can understand putting these to worlds together is a hard task but in my eyes it's gone in a completely wrong path to what it could, like; training with Starks, becoming king of the free folk, travelling to essos.