Review Detail of Aditya_7228 in Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
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love the book!! was hooked instantly,, but can change the name, sounds pretty lazy.. .other than that amazing also I m heading to read your another book heard it's a great read so i off..
Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits
SleepDeprivedSloth
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The only change that I think would make it better is ''Only'' I can see the spirits. But that's only if he really is the only one and not other races that may exist in the future?
SleepDeprivedSloth:name of the book? or the mc? well I won't change MC's name but m open for book name suggestions
I think he meant books name,, MC's name is absolutely chad but the book name does sound a bit lacking.. tell you what.. how about you find a single cool word and then add the "I can see spirit" part.. like "captain America: the first avenger" types.. btw my frnd recommend the novel and she was absolutely right. it's omoshiroi
Gyraton:the main reason for the name to be I can see the spirits! is because of Vaan being the only person able to see spirits so how doesn't the name work?
but that would mean that others know about the existence of spirits. and no one does. Only wouldn't sit well here if u think about it.
Gyraton:The only change that I think would make it better is ''Only'' I can see the spirits. But that's only if he really is the only one and not other races that may exist in the future?
hmmm, it is still too vague, i think this title gives a proper meaning to the story and is simple enough. anyways, thank your friend for me
AkiraYue:I think he meant books name,, MC's name is absolutely chad but the book name does sound a bit lacking.. tell you what.. how about you find a single cool word and then add the "I can see spirit" part.. like "captain America: the first avenger" types.. btw my frnd recommend the novel and she was absolutely right. it's omoshiroi
SleepDeprivedSloth:but that would mean that others know about the existence of spirits. and no one does. Only wouldn't sit well here if u think about it.