This story is grammatically correct and easy to read. I also think the synopsis is good and initially the synopsis matches the story. The one big problem I have with this story is the fact that the story, and especially the MC's actions, are contradictory. Considering that this story is actually advertised as a "Slice if Life", you see surprisingly little of it. At least that's the case before Chapter 30. Since the paywall already starts at chapter 32, it's unclear to me at the moment whether "Slice of Life" will appear more frequently at some point.
BigToad
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