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BoredCrow
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I liked it for a while but then it suddenly started sounding ai generated. Some monologues stretched out and too much details. i get its supposed to be this way but its just plain boring. The romance and dialogues are too predictable and the story started lacking a bit of flavor near the middle chapters.

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The Orb of Worlds without Limits: Alice in Borderland

SrCuervo

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SrCuervo
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Thank you for your review, if you continue reading the level I hope I have increased the desire to continue reading. Just yesterday I finished writing the first volume, I'm going to start with the second. For the first Hunger Games story, you're pretty blunt, but I wholeheartedly accept them. The romance is not intense and if it feels weird it's because I add things from the books, by this I mean literally the books, but hey, it's a fanfiction and I'm always improving.

BoredCrow
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im sorry if it came out as a bit rude its only since I enjoyed a bit of the story and then suddenly all the eh sorta dialogues and monologues popped up it was sometimes cringe as well. I thank you for understanding my review wholeheartedly.

SrCuervo:Thank you for your review, if you continue reading the level I hope I have increased the desire to continue reading. Just yesterday I finished writing the first volume, I'm going to start with the second. For the first Hunger Games story, you're pretty blunt, but I wholeheartedly accept them. The romance is not intense and if it feels weird it's because I add things from the books, by this I mean literally the books, but hey, it's a fanfiction and I'm always improving.
SrCuervo
SrCuervoAuthorSrCuervo

I will work much more on the dialogues, thanks for sharing your opinion.

BoredCrow:im sorry if it came out as a bit rude its only since I enjoyed a bit of the story and then suddenly all the eh sorta dialogues and monologues popped up it was sometimes cringe as well. I thank you for understanding my review wholeheartedly.