The story has been great so far, with gramme better than 90% of the fabrics on here. Good concept, and as of chapter 12 it's been great.
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I read your walking dead fanfic(20 chapters) and have to say that you have improved a lot. The dialogue is still iffy, but its still much better. Maybe to help with the dialogue you should read the dialogue out loud, and if it sounds weird when you say it out loud, change it.
SrCuervo:I'm glad to hear that, initially if I consider my other stories I haven't had good grammar, but it's nice to know that my efforts have resulted in better things. I hope you like the story, and thank you very much for lert.