Review Detail of Zetsway in To Be Continued......

So many bad things in this I can't even remember them all. Most annoying is the inconsistency. In Gamer type stories this is the most annoying thing ever. One day his taijutsu is level 4 then it levels up and its level 3...The same with chakra control and some others... Another thing that I see as a red flag is MC's age. He is 8 years old. As a gamer...This fic will only have the MC be a child or the author will severely nerf and stun his growth. I dislike child MCs. Even the 12-14 years olds in the OG Naruto are a bit annoying, but at least they don't act like adults. Having an 8 yo act like and adult and no one seeing anything wrong with it is so bad... Another very bad point in this is the awareness of ninja in Konoha. The MC does a lot of stupid things that are never noticed. This is including that he killed a dude right after making a huge commotion. And no one batted an eye.