Overall, i think you have a great writing ability. However, i am not sure that this book is the right one for me. When i was reading it, i got the feeling that this book takes the canon story a bit too literally. Only read 4 chapters, but i was already feeling like i could predict what will happen in the next chapter. Honestly, it could be because i have read a billion books that use the Gamer system and books that follow every single major canon event in the Naruto series. Like I’m almost 100% confident that the MC will go on the land of waves mission and maybe Haku will live. Again havent gotten past day at the academy (chapter 3/4) yet. It just didn’t feel unique. The cover art looks nice though.
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