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Ptitkactus
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Character and story development is pretty much dead on the mc part outside of having 100 pokemons that don't do much.

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Pokemon: A life worth living

Nuclide

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Nuclide
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Caution, spoilers for the latest chapters ahead!!I mean, the MC became a celebrated researcher and recipe book author. He proposed to his longtime girlfriend, who only recently fulfilled her longtime goal of becoming a gym leader, while Courtney, the helper he has working on his farm, entered a relationship. He reaffirmed his familial relationship with Elm's family that grew over the two earth years he spent in the world.Then there are legendary pokemon giving him missions, him interacting with important league personell like professors, gym leaders, and champions all the while this is a slice of life novel, not an action packed thriller.What more character development could I do? How much more action needs to happen in a slice of life novel? Or do you not consider what I wrote as development and simply stuff that happens to him? đŸ€”

R0berto
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I think he wants this kind of development. hahahah

Nuclide:Caution, spoilers for the latest chapters ahead!!I mean, the MC became a celebrated researcher and recipe book author. He proposed to his longtime girlfriend, who only recently fulfilled her longtime goal of becoming a gym leader, while Courtney, the helper he has working on his farm, entered a relationship. He reaffirmed his familial relationship with Elm's family that grew over the two earth years he spent in the world.Then there are legendary pokemon giving him missions, him interacting with important league personell like professors, gym leaders, and champions all the while this is a slice of life novel, not an action packed thriller.What more character development could I do? How much more action needs to happen in a slice of life novel? Or do you not consider what I wrote as development and simply stuff that happens to him? đŸ€”