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Review Detail of tatekim in Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

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Dropped at chap35. Nothing new for an HP fanfic, and there's no problem with that. The real issue is: - Short chapters - MC with no emotions - A strange concept of a 'villain' - The novel feels more like a summary The author has some good ideas, such as testing the plot. However, it's never developed further; it always feels like a summary.

Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System

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