Review Detail of Mas_W in Harry Potter World with Villain Choice System
Review detail
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Dao_Master_PenguinLv4Dao_Master_Penguin
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LuciFer_KarDamLv4LuciFer_KarDam
Bro is it a Harem? please tell me it's a Harem!, if it's a Harem then I want Hermione, Luna, Fluer, Dephene, Astoria, Tonks etc in the harem please [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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machadogbcLv15machadogbc
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ReimossLv13Reimoss
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well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
Reimoss:You don't even know when to use his and her
ReimossLv13Reimoss
Good try but no, you didn't get it.Example:The grandma looked at HIS grandson.The grandson looked at HER grandma.This is the level of this novel.
souryourer:well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
ReimossLv13Reimoss
souryourer:well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
ReimossLv13Reimoss
souryourer:well you write two novels with male and female lead at the same time some mistakes are commonI am writing 8 novels by myself and did not have time to check Grammerso please don't mind the small things
RuckduckerLv4Ruckducker
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Tunic01Lv15Tunic01
LuciFer_KarDam:Bro is it a Harem? please tell me it's a Harem!, if it's a Harem then I want Hermione, Luna, Fluer, Dephene, Astoria, Tonks etc in the harem please [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tunic01Lv15Tunic01
Kaiser_6117:although not to the point of him killing himself but I have the same reaction
SlySkeletonLv12SlySkeleton
Reimoss:Good try but no, you didn't get it.Example:The grandma looked at HIS grandson.The grandson looked at HER grandma.This is the level of this novel.
Sami_AlfohedayLv13Sami_Alfoheday
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