I liked the premise and the start of the novel: i.e. a mosquitoe as the main character. Unfortunately, he turns back into a human at chapter 28. I continued till the 40s, but it just didn't interest me anymore.
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LIKEHe evolved into vampire in ch 28 to be specific. The next 20-25 chapter are world building and character introduction... from ch 70, the war arc starts I guess. You can skip the chapter in mid, it won't affect the reading experience very much. Though, I can't change anything in story now, thanks for letting me know your opinion about my story. ❤️