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Review Detail of TheRamenLord in The hollywood Dream

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TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordLv131yrTheRamenLord

As a Hollywood novel it automatically gets a 5 star review. Its actually good the pacing of the story could be more consistent like you get almost no sense about how much time has passed in the story as it is very vague. Except for this small critic i got no other problems. Great start hope to see more

The hollywood Dream

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Daoist8uYrBw
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yaa i will include that later and make it more realistic on timeline

TheRamenLord
TheRamenLordLv13TheRamenLord

looking forward to seeing that happen

Daoist8uYrBw:yaa i will include that later and make it more realistic on timeline