As a Hollywood novel it automatically gets a 5 star review. Its actually good the pacing of the story could be more consistent like you get almost no sense about how much time has passed in the story as it is very vague. Except for this small critic i got no other problems. Great start hope to see more
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LIKEDaoist8uYrBw:yaa i will include that later and make it more realistic on timeline