Review Detail of Thalia_Ilace in Rain Rain Go Away Come Again Another Day

This was really amazing! Your details are top tier and full of life! The only things I really had issue with were that you point of view twice and that was really confusing. I felt like you also were a bit repetitive with describing the rooms in the first chapter. The discussion with the "author" also wasn't my cup of tea, but that's just me. But other than that, this was perfection!