Really interesting story with a well developed history and world - the only bad point about that would be that the world-building could come across as info dumping to some. Otherwise plot is really good, with some twists and turns. As for grammar, it's okay but there are times when tenses mess up the flow of the story. The story is also told in different pov and I must say it's done quite well. It's full of adventure and strong female characters, plus what looks to be a budding romance so would recommend to fantasy adventure fans.
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