overall the story is interesting, but nothing really interesting ever happens, the main character just switches from one person to the other, and seems really overpowered. in conclusion the story is fine, but there isn't any excitement or suspense.
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LIKEA_N_V:Will happen. It's in the same progression as The Oracle Paths in terms of Romanceimage
The reason why there isn't anything "interesting" happening is because I want to give all the MC's power a thorough definition. I don't want to make my viewers feel confused about what and how anything happens when it happens. As anyone would have read the story till chapter 60. The power MC's inheritance holds is something that is mind-numbing, but it doesn't make it strong per se. I am just setting up a clear playing field so that when the exciting part comes, it would just be exciting and not just confusion mixed with excitement. I am happy to see that you find my first volume interesting because the first volume is just named The Prologue.
A_N_V:The reason why there isn't anything "interesting" happening is because I want to give all the MC's power a thorough definition. I don't want to make my viewers feel confused about what and how anything happens when it happens. As anyone would have read the story till chapter 60. The power MC's inheritance holds is something that is mind-numbing, but it doesn't make it strong per se. I am just setting up a clear playing field so that when the exciting part comes, it would just be exciting and not just confusion mixed with excitement. I am happy to see that you find my first volume interesting because the first volume is just named The Prologue.image