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Is it just me or are there a lot of things missing , like info on what happened, lime in the end of the first chapter MC was attacked my a woman but sudenly in the next chapter its talking about his choice ?? what happened to the woman , same for the end of chapter 4 , MC asked system if the one standing up was the protagonist and sudenly in chapter 5 he was alrady busy with the bullies or whatever , like when did he move , lots of things missing

Villain's Ascension: In a Reverse Immortal World

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Isjan_Kak
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Actually you are right, as it was an editing fluke on my side I have already corrected it and now you can read it And,Feel free to share the problem of the novel with me, and I'll be happy to make corrections in the novel if needed.