Review Detail of THE_WORDSMITH in Mafia King's Obsession

This is an initial review. I like the way the author has written the story. Flips in POVs are interesting and funny. Another thing that I like is how both the characters are so different, yet they carry a subtle similarity in their natures. The flow is good and connected. I look forward to reading more, just a few tiny corrections; please re-read and correct the typos.