Review Detail of daisora in Dungeon King: My Goblins Have Captured Countless Female Players

you put effort into making this novel and it turned into a good novel but sadly there is several points that is making it unfruitful.for example you made an adventure into the dwarf kingdom made the mc into the its king with the 2 Elf princess as his wives and a rich mine but later you disposed of it all by two words "kingdom fall" without anything out of this Volume but Victor and a potential enemy that rarely appeared.this is just one of the many event that you made only to dispose of later, I have the felling that you are merely throwing out all kind of events without prober planning or that you forget about it.