Review Detail of LifeDayDreams in SHIMMERING MIST : HATAKE SI (Naruto)

A job well done. Obviously there is no reader that will like everything about a work and there are some places I don't like either, like toward the end when he accepted placing his life in the hands of those who were begging for his help, before he could help them, after he had to forsake his old life. His mentality could be somewhat understood but still...