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Item: A Ninja in a World of Heroes
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Sham_PainLv41yrSham_Pain

good idea, terrible execution. I felt like I was going to get a migraine from trying to decipher what was written. Randomly switches to using first-person POV and just overall very unrefined and clunky writing.

A Ninja in a World of Heroes

Magobrujo

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MagobrujoAuthorMagobrujo

I think I understand, don't worry I'll try to correct those errors, thanks for reading :)

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