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Review Detail of HEMANG_SEN in Naruto: Family System

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HEMANG_SEN
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Ok I am going to be very straight forward . This story is not for people who have average number of brain cells. Shisui is shown as an idiot who falls under everybody's schemes. Hiruzen is shown as a xianxia noble lord , scheming behind everybody's backs. Although .... well this is essentially a xianxia novel translation. YOU HEARD IT RIGHT FELLAS , all this hype , the ridiculous amount of power stones the story has . all for a "TRANSLATION" of a XIANXIA novel "Making Uchiha great again". You know I have already read the novel a little ahead (--_--; Till the extend I could before I had to start preserving my neurons , obviously) and I believe this is literally a scam. I dont understand how people on webnovel are so dumb!!! There nothing extraordinary in this novel AT ALL!! What is wrong with you dumb idiots . If you are so interested in this "masterpiece" why not visit MTL,lol. I can't even blame the author he is doing quite a job milking these fools. What a travesty and complete insult to all the authors on this platform; all because of US

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DaoistH0qkyJ
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writing is good..story is developing nice different from canon...there is no grammatical mistake or any unreadable contentone major problem is long winded content...there are many redundant lines...

pingvinchik
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this is a fanfic not the original story and they explained why it happened and i will repeat the fanfic this is when the story is different and if it shows hiruzen being manipulated and you don't like it don't be offended by this fanfic

Percy_Leon
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You can't be seriously saying this , right . This doesn't deserve to have that many power stones and high ranking. This is wrong because legitimate stories are being sidetracked for this . Its not fair at all

pingvinchik:this is a fanfic not the original story and they explained why it happened and i will repeat the fanfic this is when the story is different and if it shows hiruzen being manipulated and you don't like it don't be offended by this fanfic
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pingvinchik
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no, I didn’t like it either, it’s just when you said that you don’t like that Hiruzen is different, I’m talking about it

Percy_Leon:You can't be seriously saying this , right . This doesn't deserve to have that many power stones and high ranking. This is wrong because legitimate stories are being sidetracked for this . Its not fair at all
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rahul_8553
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Honestly I tried going on mtl but every novel I find sucks in my opinion and has way more gramar errors than this webnovel even if copied so I don't care

Apollyon_
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Just put it through chat for instead of mtl

rahul_8553:Honestly I tried going on mtl but every novel I find sucks in my opinion and has way more gramar errors than this webnovel even if copied so I don't care
GENGHIS_KHAN
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Shisui is an easily manipulated idiot though.

ApathyPotato
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So Shisui really is an idiot, too naive to be a shinobi. This idiot actually talked about how he could change someone's will without the target's knowledge.And Hiruzen is not so kind and selfless, although not as evil as he is shown in many fanfictions. Naruto was discriminated against throughout the village, but the "kind" grandfather did not hate him and talked about the will of fire, what a kind person he is.

YoungMasterMeng
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What the author said is actually correct tho , shishui becomes a believer of will of fire , hiruzen let danzo do all those evil things to manipulate (letting 2nd hokage die,genocide of uchiha)

One_Azure
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The fact that you wrote such so many words just to criticize the translate and people who enjoy this novel probably made you lose more braincells than reading the entire fix, it's a fanfiction it's just how they go they are not always winners, at most slightly better than the rest.

YoungMasterMeng
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4th I mean 😅

YoungMasterMeng:What the author said is actually correct tho , shishui becomes a believer of will of fire , hiruzen let danzo do all those evil things to manipulate (letting 2nd hokage die,genocide of uchiha)
DaoistP1kjhs
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the translation here is much better than in the MTL, so I always read the updated chapters here but please hurry up the chapter release.I always leave a power stone per good chapterđŸ«Ą

Hiraeth_999
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Any good fanfic recommendations like this one?