Review Detail of Thenewguy in The Dark Novels

I feel like I should finally give a review as this is like the second novel I read regularly but I don't really know how to write a review so here we go: 1:Translation is great I think though I don't know what the Translation Quality rating is for as I think this was originally written in English but it's good. 2:Updating Stability is good most of the time can't really say much else. 3:Story Development arc 1 was fun and as a fan of durarara I like different povs. 4:Character Design is cool though I feel like more discription would be good. 5:world background is probably my favorite part of the story so far since it reminds me of toaru with there being a magic side and a science side. This is the first review I have ever written so it might not be the best I just hope this story gets more exposure.